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Randy: My comments are inline. First questions are feats

Brb1/Sor6 Starting level is 6, please revise.
Race:Human ---
Racial Abilities: Racial stuff
Alignment: CG | Size: M | Type:Human(Dragonblood)
Sex: Female | Height: --- | Weight: --- | Hair: Brassy blonde with white highlights | Eyes: ---
Patron Deity: Draconic[Bahamut]
Abilities Str 14 +2 | Dex 14 +2 | Con 14 +2 | Int 14 +0 | Wis 10 +2 | Cha 15 +2

I haven't taken a close look at this yet. AC 22, touch 16, flat-footed 20 | (+2 Dex, +6 Armor, +4 Shield) No armor or shield listed in equipment.
HP 40 (HD:1d12(12) barb+6d4(18) sorc+10 con)
Init +2
Speed 40'
Fort +6, Ref +4, Will +5

+2 morale bonus to will during rage

Template:DF vs cold, paralysis, sleep

Resistance 5 fire, Template:DF*3 cold

Attacks I haven't looked at this yet

Claws +6 | 1d6+2 | Crit 20/*2 | P/S | 0 lbs.
Special: Other weapon details
Composite Longbow +6 | 1d8+2 | 20/*3 | Range: 130' | P | 3 lbs.
Special: Mighty+2, Masterwork, Dragonbone
Weapon +0 | damage | Crit | Range: 0' | P/S/B/other | 0 lbs.
Special: Other weapon details

Base Attack +4 | Grapple +6 (+4 BAB)

Feats
Total Draconic Feats (DF): Template:DF

1st: Draconic Heritage {White} [DRACONIC], DragonMagic p17
Gain bonus of Template:DF against magical sleep, paralysis, and against spells and abilities with the cold energy descriptor. Balance is always considered a class skill.

Human: Draconic Senses [DRACONIC] DragonMagic, p17
Gain low-light vision and darkvision 60', bonus to Listen, Search, and Spot equal to Template:DF

Sor2: Draconic Claws [DRACONIC] CA p77
Gain Claws, 1d6 dmg. When you cast a spell with a casting time of at least one standard action, you may use a swift action to attack an opponent you threaten.

3rd: Dragon Totem {Brass}, EB p52
Gain resistance 5 fire.

6th: Draconic Resistance [DRACONIC] CA p78

Gain cold resistance 3*Template:DF.

You had too many feats listed, the feat below will have to wait until 9th lvl unless you want to swap it in.

6th: Draconic Toughness

Gain 2*[DF] hp.

Skills
I haven't looked at skills yet

Appraise +0 (0 ranks)
Balance +0 (0 ranks)
Bluff +12 (10 ranks)
Climb +6 (4 ranks)
Concentration +9 (7 ranks)
Craft +0 (0 ranks)
Decipher Script +0 (0 ranks)
Diplomacy +0 (0 ranks)
Disable Device +0 (0 ranks)
Disguise +0 (0 ranks)
Escape Artist +0 (0 ranks)
Forgery +0 (0 ranks)
Gather Information +0 (0 ranks)
Handle Animal +6 (4 ranks)
Heal +0 (0 ranks)
Hide +0 (0 ranks)
Intimidate +8 (4 ranks)
Jump +10 (4 ranks)
Knowledge +11 (5 ranks)
Listen +10 (4 ranks)
Move Silently +0 (0 ranks)
Open Lock +0 (0 ranks)
Perform +0 (0 ranks)
Profession +0 (0 ranks)
Ride +6 (4 ranks)
Search +8 (0 ranks)
Sense Motive +0 (0 ranks)
Sleight Of Hand +0 (0 ranks)
Speak Language +0 (0 ranks)
Spellcraft +5 (1 ranks)
Spot +6 (0 ranks)
Survival +0 (0 ranks)
Swim +6 (4 ranks)
Tumble +0 (0 ranks)
Use Magic Device +10 (8 ranks)
Use Rope +0 (0 ranks)

Languages: Common, Draconic, Halfling, Orc

Ist'Vaech/Familiar <create new page for familiar's stats>

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 *[[Ist'Vaech/Familiar]]
-'''Brb1/Sor6''' <br>
+<span style="color:red">'''Randy:''' My comments are inline. First questions are feats</span>
+'''Brb1/Sor6''' <span style="color:red">Starting level is 6, please revise.</span> <br>
 '''Race:Human''' --- <br>
 Racial Abilities: ''Racial stuff''<br>
-Alignment: CG | Size: M | Type:Human(Dragonblood)<br>
+Alignment: CG | Size: M | Type:Human(Dragonblood) <br>
 Sex: Female | Height: --- | Weight: --- | Hair: Brassy blonde with white highlights | Eyes: ---<br>
 Patron Deity: Draconic[Bahamut]<br>
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 Cha 15 +2<br>
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-'''AC''' 22, touch 16, flat-footed 20 | ''(+2 Dex, +6 Armor, +4 Shield)''<br>
+<span style="color:red">I haven't taken a close look at this yet.</span>
-'''HP''' 56 (HD:1d12+6d4+14+12)<br>
+'''AC''' 22, touch 16, flat-footed 20 | ''(+2 Dex, +6 Armor, +4 Shield)'' <span style="color:red">No armor or shield listed in equipment.</span><br>
+'''HP''' 40 (HD:1d12(12) barb+6d4(18) sorc+10 con)<br>
 '''Init''' +2<br>
 '''Speed''' 40'<br>
 '''Fort''' +6, '''Ref''' +4, '''Will''' +5<br>
 :+2 morale bonus to will during rage
-:+6 vs cold, paralysis, sleep
+:{{DF}} vs cold, paralysis, sleep
-:Resistance 5 fire, 18 cold<br>
+:Resistance 5 fire, {{DF}}*3 cold<br>
 -----
 '''Attacks'''
+<span style="color:red">I haven't looked at this yet</span>
 *'''Claws +6''' | '''1d6+2''' | Crit 20/*2 | P/S | 0 lbs.<br>Special: ''Other weapon details''<br>
 *'''Composite Longbow +6''' | '''1d8+2''' | 20/*3 | Range: 130' | P | 3 lbs.<br>Special: Mighty+2, Masterwork, Dragonbone''<br>
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 '''Feats'''<br>
-*1st: Dragon Totem {Brass}
+Total Draconic Feats (DF): {{DF}}
-''Gain resistance 5 fire.
+<!--
-*Human:Draconic Senses
-''Gain low-light, +[DF] bonus to listen, search, spot.Three [DF] gains darkvision 60'.Four [DF] gains blindsense 20'.
+This variable above, DF, will automatically place the number of Draconic Feats everywhere it needs to be. If you need to change this, go to Template:DF
-*Sor1: Draconic Heritage {White}
-''Gain [DF] bonus to cold, paralysis, sleep saves.
+-->
-*3rd: Draconic Claws
+*1st: '''Draconic Heritage {White} [DRACONIC]''', DragonMagic p17 <br />''Gain bonus of {{DF}} against magical sleep, paralysis, and against spells and abilities with the cold energy descriptor. Balance is always considered a class skill.''
-''Gain 1d6 claws and swift attack when casting a spell.
-*Sor3: Draconic Resistance
+*Human: '''Draconic Senses [DRACONIC]''' DragonMagic, p17 <br />''Gain low-light vision and darkvision 60', bonus to Listen, Search, and Spot equal to {{DF}}
-''Gain cold resistance 3*[DF].
+*Sor2: '''Draconic Claws [DRACONIC]''' CA p77 <br />''Gain Claws, 1d6 dmg. When you cast a spell with a casting time of at least one standard action, you may use a swift action to attack an opponent you threaten.''
+*3rd: '''Dragon Totem {Brass}''', EB p52 <br />''Gain resistance 5 fire.''
+*6th: '''Draconic Resistance [DRACONIC]''' CA p78
+''Gain cold resistance 3*{{DF}}.
+<span style="color:red">You had too many feats listed, the feat below will have to wait until 9th lvl unless you want to swap it in.
 *6th: Draconic Toughness
-''Gain 2*[DF] hp.
+''Gain 2*[DF] hp.</span>
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 '''Skills'''<br>
+<span style="color:red">I haven't looked at skills yet</span>
 * [[srd:skills/appraise.htm | Appraise]] +0 (0 ranks)
 * [[srd:skills/balance.htm | Balance]] +0 (0 ranks)
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 * [[srd:skills/useRope.htm | Use Rope]] +0 (0 ranks)
 '''Languages:''' Common, Draconic, Halfling, Orc <br>
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-'''Wizard Spells:'''<br>
-'''Caster level ---'''<br>
-'''[[Ist'Vaech/Spellbook]]''' <Create a new page for the spellbook.><br>
-'''Close Range:''' --- | '''Medium Range:''' --- | '''Long Range:''' --- <br>
-'''Memorized Spells'''
-'''1st level spells | DC 10 | 0+bonus'''
-#Insert spell
-#Insert Spell
-:B Insert Bonus spell from high INT/CHR
-'''0th level | DC 10 | 0'''
-#Insert Spell
-#Insert Spell
 [[Ist'Vaech/Familiar]] <create new page for familiar's stats>
 [[Category:PC]]